5th Song - Feedback Appreciated

Hi All,

This is my 5th attempt at making a song in Logic, i think its definitely an improvement on earlier songs but still sounds quite amateurish. It was all made in the box with no 3rd party plug-ins or anything other than Logic Pro X.

Any feedback on any aspects (structure, melody, mix down etc) is welcome.

Thanks

https://soundcloud.com/hughes81%2Fthose-eyes
 
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